IT DEFINITELY IS NOT FINISHED PRODUCT
Oh, and I legally changed my name to "Nelson Fluffernutter"
the following a-be the thing
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The Hollow
Inside the hollow emptiness
where the Flying Dutchman has made its home
live and die the trolls in their chains
trying to make deals with the gnomes.
“Who invented this darkness?”,
inquires a dwarf with a pain.
Just then enters a hypnotist
who’s been waiting in the rain
with his eyeballs all bloodshot
from the mercury in his brain.
He raises his watch to his eye
and declares all self-satisfied
“You should not ask who.
what you should ask, is why.”
“You should not ask who but, why.”
(If all the Beings
of the written sky
would only reveal
their naked eyes…)
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Required follow up:
Now, does the writer give the impression they have a working intellect?
Does the writer favor the hypnotist or the trolls? What about the imaginary character the writer didn't even bother to write into the piece?
Was it necessary for the writer to restate "you should not ask who" as though they had forgotten what they were attempting to accomplish?
If the writer asked nicely, would you hand over the keys to your automobile?
Is that a Twisted Sister pin on your uniform?
